Photo taken by Lindsay Burkholder
The fog has lifted
Lovers lost in tender gaze
You may kiss the bride
To no avail
23 Sep 2011 24 Comments
in Haiku/Senryu/17 Syllables, Poetry, Word Prompt Tags: April Hoekstra, Eliana Anthony, Jocelin Bell, Jocelin Yagel, Joshua Coleman, Lindsay Anne Dransfield, Lindsay Burkholder, lost, Luke Link, Poetry, Tim Yagel
Sep 23, 2011 @ 16:04:55
I am so enamored with love poems…I like this one a lot.
Sep 23, 2011 @ 16:32:31
Thanks! My love poems are rare, so I’m glad to know that this measures up in your estimation
Sep 23, 2011 @ 16:11:27
sweet…
Sep 23, 2011 @ 16:33:30
Aw, thanks! I think I’m gonna use this on a wedding card for my friend
Sep 23, 2011 @ 17:08:28
Good idea. A nice thought.
Sep 23, 2011 @ 17:53:25
Thanks! I already have a very personalized poem, but I wanted something extra
Sep 23, 2011 @ 18:07:59
Wow! Lovely lines. Good for a Marriage Invitation Card. Well written.
Sep 23, 2011 @ 21:15:23
Aw, thanks! Though I’m not at the stage of inviting anyone to my wedding, I’ll keep that in mind
Sep 23, 2011 @ 18:45:46
sweet and tender ~
Sep 23, 2011 @ 21:19:13
Thanks! Sounds like something off a restaurant menu
Hope it was delicious!
Sep 23, 2011 @ 22:30:50
So sweet!
Sep 23, 2011 @ 23:10:06
Thanks!
Sep 24, 2011 @ 00:16:20
All is well that ends well!! From being lost in a mental fog to being lost in love! Sweet journey to cherish!!
Sep 24, 2011 @ 16:38:01
Thanks! The journey may be fraught with dangers, but sweet bliss awaits
Sep 24, 2011 @ 00:59:42
Smooth and graceful! I like it!
Sep 24, 2011 @ 16:38:43
Thank you!
Sep 24, 2011 @ 07:55:40
A great haiku.
Sep 24, 2011 @ 16:39:19
Thanks Mike
Sep 24, 2011 @ 11:13:45
Lovers in their own world without a care! Lovely!
Hank
Sep 24, 2011 @ 16:40:55
Mmm, how true–lovers are often peacefully oblivious–thanks!
Sep 24, 2011 @ 13:15:04
Oh, to be lost in a tender gaze… Wonderful!
Sep 24, 2011 @ 16:43:32
It’s a magical moment when it does happen; it’s even a happy event when it’s happening to someone else. Thanks!
Sep 24, 2011 @ 13:32:07
A lovely kind of lostness!
Lost Things here and here
Sep 24, 2011 @ 16:46:47
Wonderful words, those. Thanks for the links–they made me quite thirsty, though