Treated you unfairly
Like a bully
Treats a weakling
Strictly speaking
I’ve been dumb
Wagged my thumb
In your direction
Resist correction
From the teacher
Hard to reach, or
Staying open?
Poetry on adrenaline
20 Jan 2012 8 Comments
in Metaphor/Simile, Poetry Tags: Airlock, Poetry
Treated you unfairly
Like a bully
Treats a weakling
Strictly speaking
I’ve been dumb
Wagged my thumb
In your direction
Resist correction
From the teacher
Hard to reach, or
Staying open?
Jan 20, 2012 @ 12:58:21
I like this. Especially ‘hard to reach, or staying open?
Jan 20, 2012 @ 15:48:40
Thanks! I liked the aftertaste it left
Jan 20, 2012 @ 21:15:51
this just stuck to my head too
Jan 21, 2012 @ 10:43:41
Thanks! I’m so glad; I tried to make it build to a ponderous finish
Jan 20, 2012 @ 16:26:27
smart wordplay.
Jan 20, 2012 @ 16:41:56
Thank you! You’re encouraging as always–I really appreciate your support
Jan 23, 2012 @ 16:40:33
cool verse,
Jan 23, 2012 @ 21:35:38
Thanks! It’s nice to have snowflakes on my blog–I miss the animated ones