Poetry on adrenaline
20 Jan 2012 8 Comments
in Metaphor/Simile, Poetry
Tags: Airlock, Poetry
Treated you unfairly
Like a bully
Treats a weakling
I’ve been dumb
Wagged my thumb
In your direction
From the teacher
Hard to reach, or
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Jan 20, 2012 @ 12:58:21
I like this. Especially ‘hard to reach, or staying open?
Jan 20, 2012 @ 15:48:40
Thanks! I liked the aftertaste it left
Jan 20, 2012 @ 21:15:51
this just stuck to my head too
Jan 21, 2012 @ 10:43:41
Thanks! I’m so glad; I tried to make it build to a ponderous finish
Jan 20, 2012 @ 16:26:27
Jan 20, 2012 @ 16:41:56
Thank you! You’re encouraging as always–I really appreciate your support
Jan 23, 2012 @ 16:40:33
Jan 23, 2012 @ 21:35:38
Thanks! It’s nice to have snowflakes on my blog–I miss the animated ones
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