Poise


There she stood, balanced
Graceful even in stillness
Then began to dance

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 22 – February 22nd – Theme: Paint the Image…Photo Clicked by Enosh of: Enosh Bansode Photography

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17 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Magical Mystical Teacher
    Feb 22, 2012 @ 08:45:36

    I imagine myself standing on the sidelines, waiting for the dance to begin…

    Painted Images here and here

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  2. Asni
    Feb 22, 2012 @ 08:48:01

    I like “graceful even in stillness” – love it!

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  3. elleceefEllecee
    Feb 22, 2012 @ 10:27:58

    I can sense her anticipation – nice Haiku. Thank you

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  4. Mama Zen
    Feb 22, 2012 @ 12:05:30

    Just perfect!

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  5. becca givens
    Feb 22, 2012 @ 12:38:45

    I can see her in your word imagery … she is graceful and poised … waiting to begin! Very nicely done ~~ Here is my Day 22.

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  6. Grace
    Feb 22, 2012 @ 13:01:12

    Very nice…specially the second line ~

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  7. Andy Sewina
    Feb 22, 2012 @ 21:31:26

    Yeah, I like the way you projected this forward to the next shot.

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  8. Someone is Special
    Feb 23, 2012 @ 19:17:39

    ‘let her’ ~ beautiful………….

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  9. Mara
    Feb 23, 2012 @ 20:40:04

    Now I’m left waiting for the dance to begin. I suppose I’ll just have to use my imagination.

    I’m new to your blog and like what I see.

    -Mara

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    • wordcoaster
      Feb 23, 2012 @ 22:37:27

      Glad I could convey a sense of longing! And yes, I’m sure you could imagine a beautiful dance. Thanks for visiting–I like your blog as well (though blogspot still doesn’t like me) and feel free to look around :)

      Reply

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