Don’t waste this night;
Waste tomorrow instead.
Become nocturnal during the summer
And return to normal during the winter–
Stay out with the fireflies and the foxes and the wolves,
Especially the wolves.
Pack a midnight lunch
And eat it while lying flat on a grassy knoll with your nose an inch from the sky;
Don’t sit up or you’ll hit your head.
Instead, roll
And then run
Down darkened streets past dormant houses
Destination: somehow evades you,
But if you run fast or far enough, you’ll find it
And then you’ll sit down
And enjoy the moment, this perfect place you’ve found–
The place your soul was searching for, scouring for, screaming for.
Alone?
That’s up to you.
The night is young and so are you:
Date her before you’re both too late–
And it’s not a good date if you both end up in bed.
Don’t be a slut!
No, treat her nicely.
You have to spend at least ha
——————————————–-lf of your lives together;
Don’t waste this night!

Mar 08, 2012 @ 14:22:04
This is so lovely. I just love the idea of sitting up and hitting one’s head on the sky. I am nocturnal! But also a morning person! When I drive up to country from city late, I will walk around in darkness because I need to move–unfortunately in summer I’m a bit worried about bears! But I love the poem. K.
Mar 08, 2012 @ 14:33:26
Thank you! Summer bears shouldn’t scare you
Mar 08, 2012 @ 14:35:22
Oooh yes! I suppose if it’s not a mother with cubs. But the only time I was in close proximity–just outside my tent, with two small children and a shivering dog–it was quite terrifying! K.
Mar 09, 2012 @ 02:23:41
Oy vey! That does sound intimidating! I’ve never had such a close encounter with a bear–raccoons were always the ones to visit our campsites
Mar 09, 2012 @ 01:09:42
Loved it..
the opening lines r awesome
and the optimistic approach throughout was inspiring
Mar 09, 2012 @ 02:24:49
Thanks! I think this was written mostly to justify my night owl tendencies
Mar 10, 2012 @ 13:33:42
pretty awesome writing. Found your blog from JP and I’m glad I did.
Mar 10, 2012 @ 14:40:58
Thanks! I’ll have to make sure to visit Jingle–it’s been too long
Oct 17, 2012 @ 20:29:31
I love the sound of this wild picnic, especially one’s nose an inch from the sky and being careful or you’ll bump your head. I had somewhat similar thoughts on the topic. Love your response to the prompt.
Oct 17, 2012 @ 21:33:07
Thank you! I absolutely loved your take on the prompt–wild words on a wild subject
Oct 17, 2012 @ 23:33:29
I, too loved the carefree feeling reading your poem~ And I loved the wild picnic and the one’s nose an inch from the sky! Well Done
Oct 17, 2012 @ 23:38:36
Thank you! Wolves are among the carefree type, I presume
Oct 18, 2012 @ 00:08:43
What a wonderful romp! Love the playfulness and the line about not sitting up too fast or you’ll hit your head on the sky! Excellent.
Oct 18, 2012 @ 10:38:52
Thank you! Did you link a wolf poem as well? I didn’t see your name on the list, but would love to read your take on the prompt
Oct 18, 2012 @ 08:25:08
Oh, I do think it would be quite an adventure to be out running with the wolves at midnignt. This poem expresses the wild we all have within us…..whether visible or not.
Oct 18, 2012 @ 10:41:52
Thanks, Mary–there is indeed a wildness within. I enjoyed your opposite take highlighting the reliability and loyalty of the wolf
Oct 18, 2012 @ 13:50:08
great. nice sentiment – would love to but sometimes just get so tired – but I guess that is what winter is for…
Oct 18, 2012 @ 17:26:51
Haha, I’m sure I’ll grow too tired of the imbalanced cycle soon enough. We can’t all be night owls