But I Thought…


Thoughts play nasty tricks;
Time bends like weeping willow:
Forgive my false mind.

For: http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/

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12 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Maggie Mae
    Apr 08, 2012 @ 15:15:55

    I forgive your false mind :)

    Reply

  2. Gemma Wiseman
    Apr 08, 2012 @ 18:09:34

    Beautiful simile in the second line preparing for the final confession! Delightful!

    Reply

  3. Poetry & Icecream
    Apr 08, 2012 @ 21:09:46

    Excellent senryu! Love the simile :)

    Reply

  4. magicalmysticalteacher
    Apr 08, 2012 @ 21:32:21

    Thoughts can indeed be deceitful. Gotta watch out for ‘em!

    The Christ Child at Play

    Reply

  5. becca givens
    Apr 08, 2012 @ 22:59:08

    Good job … This is my Day 8 ~~ Waiting Their Turn.

    Reply

  6. Ramesh Sood
    Apr 20, 2012 @ 00:47:44

    I love the second line here a lot.. and somehow cannot stand false minds..

    Reply

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