Swaying Near My Eyes


The green spider climbs
Her invisible ladder;
Soft threads mesmerize.

For: http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/

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18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Jaideep
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 02:04:57

    Loved it-”Her invisible ladder”

    Reply

  2. sparklysilverstars
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 07:53:33

    Very thoughtful and creative!
    Sweet Escape

    Reply

  3. Russ L
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 07:54:37

    Well done!

    Unfolded
    right
    before my eyes
    like a good Haiku
    should.

    Reply

  4. Cynosure
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 08:34:09

    wonderful, thoughtful and creative…beautifully written… :)

    Reply

  5. artmusedog
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 10:11:32

    amazing haiku ~ ^_^ ~~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

    Reply

  6. Ramesh Sood
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 13:11:23

    I see a spider moving.. thanks I could see in absence of picture..

    Reply

    • wordcoaster
      Apr 23, 2012 @ 17:54:47

      Thank you! This post will eventually have a picture, but right now my laptop won’t connect to the internet so my pictures will have to wait. Enjoy the bare words while you can ;)

      Reply

  7. Patti
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 14:32:47

    Well done. I’m all caught up in her web.

    Reply

  8. magicalmysticalteacher
    Apr 23, 2012 @ 21:04:23

    Not ever having seen a green spider before, I’d be mesmerised no matter what she was doing!

    Mesmerize

    Reply

  9. Mr. Walker
    Apr 25, 2012 @ 09:40:10

    Beautiful. I love all the haiku some have written using ideas from nature. I love the delicacy of that last line.

    Richard

    Reply

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