Poetry on adrenaline
23 Apr 2012 18 Comments
in Haiku/Senryu/17 Syllables, Poetry, Word Prompt
Tags: mesmerize, Poetry
The green spider climbs
Her invisible ladder;
Soft threads mesmerize.
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Apr 23, 2012 @ 02:04:57
Loved it-“Her invisible ladder”
Apr 23, 2012 @ 11:23:54
Thanks! I hoped that phrase would carry the imagery :)
Apr 23, 2012 @ 07:53:33
Very thoughtful and creative!
Apr 23, 2012 @ 11:24:21
Thank you! I just wrote what I knew :)
Apr 23, 2012 @ 07:54:37
before my eyes
like a good Haiku
Apr 23, 2012 @ 11:24:56
Aw, thanks! Glad you could really see it! :)
Apr 23, 2012 @ 08:34:09
wonderful, thoughtful and creative…beautifully written… :)
Apr 23, 2012 @ 11:34:21
Thank you! So much encouragement from a wonderful poet :)
Apr 23, 2012 @ 10:11:32
amazing haiku ~ ^_^ ~~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
Apr 23, 2012 @ 11:34:51
Thank you! :)
Apr 23, 2012 @ 13:11:23
I see a spider moving.. thanks I could see in absence of picture..
Apr 23, 2012 @ 17:54:47
Thank you! This post will eventually have a picture, but right now my laptop won’t connect to the internet so my pictures will have to wait. Enjoy the bare words while you can ;)
Apr 23, 2012 @ 14:32:47
Well done. I’m all caught up in her web.
Apr 23, 2012 @ 17:55:56
Thanks! Don’t struggle–it only gets you more tangled ;)
Apr 23, 2012 @ 21:04:23
Not ever having seen a green spider before, I’d be mesmerised no matter what she was doing!
Apr 23, 2012 @ 22:11:26
She was incredibly small–almost didn’t see her just floating by :)
Apr 25, 2012 @ 09:40:10
Beautiful. I love all the haiku some have written using ideas from nature. I love the delicacy of that last line.
Apr 25, 2012 @ 11:12:27
Thank you so much! I tend to write more senryu than haiku, but I enjoy reading everyone else’s haiku! :)
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