I fold


Parades of people
Paper-thin origami
Paper cuts still hurt

For: http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/

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24 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. magicalmysticalteacher
    Apr 29, 2012 @ 15:43:35

    Give me a gash with a serrated knife any day over a paper cut!

    A haibun, Honey for My Soul

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  2. elleceef
    Apr 29, 2012 @ 16:34:35

    Well crafted haiku – I love origami
    but would hate the cuts.

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  3. becca givens
    Apr 29, 2012 @ 23:12:13

    A paper cut is one of the most painful nuisances!!! Nicely done!!

    Reply

  4. Mr. Walker
    Apr 30, 2012 @ 09:43:05

    Lovely. I like how each line is its own – yet together there is a story there.

    Richard

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  5. Susan
    Mar 09, 2013 @ 12:47:20

    Ouch! I had forgotten that part. Everything in moderation. I guess.

    Reply

  6. merlinspielen
    Mar 09, 2013 @ 13:15:14

    Powerful use of the haiku form to invoke contemplation

    Reply

  7. Gemma Wiseman
    Mar 09, 2013 @ 16:00:58

    Beautifully folded layering of ideas!

    Reply

  8. CuriositytotheMax
    Mar 10, 2013 @ 01:26:49

    “Paper cuts still hurt” – PERFECT last line!!!

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  9. Valli
    Mar 10, 2013 @ 05:50:20

    Loved the last line! Beautiful haiku :)

    Reply

  10. Adriana Dascalu
    Mar 10, 2013 @ 16:36:12

    beautiful!

    Reply

  11. readinpleasure
    Mar 11, 2013 @ 07:59:51

    Wonderful take :-)

    Reply

  12. Reshma
    Mar 12, 2013 @ 12:23:08

    beautifully crafted!!

    Reply

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