Sleeping, but in pain:
Can’t sit up or move around–
Rescue from a friend.
Poetry on adrenaline
27 Jan 2013 14 Comments
by wordcoaster in Haiku/Senryu/17 Syllables, Poetry Tags: Jimmy Barnett, Poetry, Sam Wells
Sleeping, but in pain:
Can’t sit up or move around–
Rescue from a friend.
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Jan 27, 2013 @ 20:56:55
I like this very personal and grabby expression through the haiku prompt “rescue”. This sounds like my sister two weeks ago. “Poor thing” to anyone in this condition.
Jan 31, 2013 @ 19:08:14
Thanks! Never thought I’d consider “grabby” a compliment–but here I definitely do. “Poor thing” is right; reduced mobility makes you feel like an object. Hope your sister’s feeling 1,000 times better now!
Jan 27, 2013 @ 21:42:50
I can feel the pain in this haiku. It’s wonderful when a friend can come and relieve you of some of it.
Feb 02, 2013 @ 16:49:33
Thank you! It is indeed wonderful when that happens
Jan 27, 2013 @ 23:25:37
I so hope that haiku wasn’t written from your personal experience OR my reversed-enginered haiku post blaming you!
Either way, feel better.
Feb 02, 2013 @ 16:50:35
This was unfortunately written from personal experience–I still need to try that reverse-engineered haiku idea. I am feeling much better; I even went dancing last night
Jan 28, 2013 @ 13:35:32
Ow, hope you feel better soon, my dear friend.
Feb 02, 2013 @ 16:59:48
Thanks; I am feeling much much better. Thanks for touching on a more significant rescue in your haiku
Jan 28, 2013 @ 19:12:22
Ouch — so sorry.
Friends are so very important. Be better sooooon !
Feb 02, 2013 @ 17:06:05
Thank you–yes, friends are often a life jacket in the storm
Jan 28, 2013 @ 20:09:44
Do hope you get well soon…
Eliz
Feb 03, 2013 @ 02:01:19
Thank you! I’m feeling much better after much rest and rehabilitation
Jan 29, 2013 @ 00:37:54
If it is personal, I hope you recover soon. One more reason to have friends.
nice haiku!
Feb 03, 2013 @ 02:04:50
Thank you so much meenakshi–friends are an undeniable treasure.