Poetry on adrenaline
02 Feb 2013 18 Comments
in Haiku/Senryu/17 Syllables, Poetry
Winter’s humble state
Melts to Spring, then Summer’s pride
Comes before a Fall.
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Feb 03, 2013 @ 03:49:37
and the cycle continues, not caring about pride , wonderful!
Feb 03, 2013 @ 17:24:50
Yes, the seasons do seem oblivious (or ambivalent). Thanks
Feb 03, 2013 @ 10:49:04
That’s very original and it made me smile x Loved it x
Feb 03, 2013 @ 17:50:33
Thank you! A smile! Mission accomplished.
Feb 03, 2013 @ 13:04:36
Beautiful circle. I like this.
Feb 03, 2013 @ 17:51:09
Thanks! I find circular poetry (unlike circular reasoning) to be calming
Feb 03, 2013 @ 16:42:07
NOW THAT’S a play on words I wish I had thought of! (That’s my highest compliment)
Feb 03, 2013 @ 18:06:55
Thank you so much! Haha, sometimes when I read good poems on other blogs I’m almost too jealous to comment.
Feb 04, 2013 @ 03:54:28
Summer’s pride and winter melting into spring.. So poetic.. Good job!!!
Feb 04, 2013 @ 13:07:31
Thanks, Locomente–nature is incredibly poetic (naturally), which is why the majority of poetry concerns nature
Feb 04, 2013 @ 06:06:30
beautiful and clever take on the prompt
Feb 04, 2013 @ 21:34:03
Thanks! This was a really fun one to write
Feb 05, 2013 @ 18:41:10
Simply wonderful…”summer’s pride before the fall” now that is ingenious
Feb 05, 2013 @ 23:29:17
Thank you! I really enjoyed your proud pair as well
Feb 06, 2013 @ 09:26:48
Well said… Beautiful use of words in your haiku.
Feb 08, 2013 @ 01:21:47
Thank you so much! Enjoyed your proud haiku as well
Magical Mystical Teacher
Feb 08, 2013 @ 18:52:33
Round and round the seasons go!
No Pride of Lions
Feb 09, 2013 @ 01:38:28
Where they stop…well, better hope it’s a season you love. Loved your take on the prompt!
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