Rapid acrid breaths
Entropy of emotions
Darting languid eyes
Seeing Red
09 Feb 2013 14 Comments
in Acrostic, Haiku/Senryu/17 Syllables, Poetry, Word Prompt Tags: Anna Mae McGucken, Poetry, red
Poetry on adrenaline
09 Feb 2013 14 Comments
in Acrostic, Haiku/Senryu/17 Syllables, Poetry, Word Prompt Tags: Anna Mae McGucken, Poetry, red
Rapid acrid breaths
Entropy of emotions
Darting languid eyes
Feb 09, 2013 @ 23:28:19
Lovely.
Feb 10, 2013 @ 15:15:57
Thank you! Enjoyed your groovy take on the prompt
Feb 10, 2013 @ 00:17:24
Like a flash of profile drama! Beautiful!
Feb 10, 2013 @ 15:19:04
Thank you, Gemma! I like your rich red haiku as well
Feb 10, 2013 @ 15:27:07
If this is someone you know/knew — whoa! pretty powerful haiku
Feb 10, 2013 @ 21:36:42
Thanks! This one isn’t strictly biographical, but it’s certainly “based on a true story”.
Feb 10, 2013 @ 22:54:39
powerfully emotive.
Feb 14, 2013 @ 19:01:09
Thanks Meenakshi!
Feb 10, 2013 @ 23:05:16
Vivid and powerful…
Feb 14, 2013 @ 19:02:51
Thank you! I enjoyed your spicy haiku as well
Feb 11, 2013 @ 13:09:52
Powerfully done, Word Coaster.
Feb 17, 2013 @ 15:00:56
Thank you!
Feb 13, 2013 @ 16:35:47
Complex… beautiful.
Feb 17, 2013 @ 15:04:19
Thank you so much!