I came back to you

But found instead a gravestone

Never said goodbye


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14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Fountains
    Jun 26, 2011 @ 02:07:08

    Wow. Unexpectedly emotional. Whether it was intended or not, leaving off the punctuation kind of sends an apathetic message, like the poet is holding back emotions and also mirrors the poem’s idea of lack of closure/finality.


  2. Leckeres fΓΌr Mensch und Katze
    Aug 15, 2011 @ 16:18:27

    Love the sunset


  3. SquirrelQueen
    Aug 16, 2011 @ 02:44:47

    Great shot. The sun ends the day in a blaze of glory.


  4. ShonEjai
    Sep 25, 2011 @ 21:23:18

    Beautiful photo. Beautifully sad words!


  5. shanyns
    Sep 26, 2011 @ 11:18:02

    Oh wow…this caught my heart and took a tear. Thank you it’s wonderfully done!


  6. Susie Clevenger
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 00:31:40

    the sun is setting..but still there…it sits on the horizon like a headstone for the sea…


  7. Peggy Goetz
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 13:42:42

    I like your sunset photo and the poem is indeed raw and stabbing.


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