Tweety’s Widdle Twin Twits (Twaddle)

Tweedle-dee and Tweedle-dum
Twiddled all their little thumbs
Twiddled ‘til the day was done,
Twiddled ‘til their thumbs were numb
Twiddled thumbs while waddling
Waddled thighs while twiddling
Twiddled and waddled to folly all
Waddled and twiddled to waterfall
What’ll befall little twiddling friends
‘Twil Tweedle-dee-dum meet plum diddly end?
No! Twebedle-debee aband Twebedle-dubum


“Webell wabaddle aband twibiddle whibile ubunder wabater”


6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. TC
    Jul 04, 2011 @ 09:33:26

    At first I found this hard to understand, but after a second read it becomes clearer.
    I also love the pictures! assuming they’re the two main charactors? 😀


    • wordcoaster
      Jul 04, 2011 @ 21:13:07

      Yeah, most times I find that poetry is better (or at least clearer) on a second read-through. Actually I wrote the poem first, but found these pictures matched up pretty well 🙂


  2. Fountains
    Jul 04, 2011 @ 10:45:27

    Cutest poem ever, and clever, too! Like the way it becomes jumbled at the end. Alice in Wonderland has been my favorite thing since I was a child. Love this.


  3. Jingle Poetry
    Jul 04, 2011 @ 23:26:09

    fun word play…

    Please join poetry potluck week 42 today,
    Feel free to submit random poems or poems unrelated to our theme.
    Happy Tuesday.
    appreciate your input.


    • wordcoaster
      Jul 05, 2011 @ 01:13:24

      Thought I’d join, since today (well, technically yesterday now) I saw my siblings, a friend, and some of my cousins. Busy day 🙂 Thanks for the invite!


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