Hard to swallow

I fight fire with fire

Fever dreams awaken fear

And your vodka lips

For: http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/

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14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. dani
    Jul 27, 2011 @ 00:01:09



    • wordcoaster
      Jul 27, 2011 @ 01:21:35

      Thanks–surprised this one hadn’t got much notice. I thought it was one of my better haiku. But better than bad doesn’t mean much πŸ˜‰ I’ll keep trying anyway πŸ™‚


  2. M.A.S
    Jul 29, 2011 @ 01:59:00

    And your vodka lips-I love it.


  3. Magical Mystical Teacher
    Apr 05, 2013 @ 20:11:11

    Vodka lips…oh, yes, those are fiery indeed!

    Fiery Desert Birds


  4. readinpleasure
    Apr 05, 2013 @ 22:22:30

    Vodka lips. Powerful line, WC. Says a lot


  5. ramblingsfromamum
    Apr 05, 2013 @ 22:54:58

    Dealing with vodka lips that evoke nightmares …. very well written. Though I do like Vodka πŸ˜‰


  6. Gemma Wiseman
    Apr 06, 2013 @ 00:55:04

    Vodka will fire the innards both physically and metaphorically! Keep the ice handy!


  7. oneofaclass
    Apr 06, 2013 @ 12:38:05

    Very nice! Keep that fire away from those vodka lips!


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