Unmet Expectations


You asked me to reinvent the wheel
I did
I’m sorry you died in a car crash

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9 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Old Ollie
    Aug 22, 2011 @ 08:01:53

    this is a poem punch…coolness

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  2. Poets United
    Aug 22, 2011 @ 08:05:01

    Yes – coolness indeed. It is s true skill to be so brief, yet express such a tragic story.

    Reply

  3. Fountains
    Aug 22, 2011 @ 12:32:08

    LOVE. LOVELOVELOVE.

    Reply

  4. muzzleflashing
    Aug 27, 2011 @ 16:47:16

    Great! It’s all fun and games until someone dies in a car crash….

    Reply

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