Yes I Did Just Compare You to a Magnet


Two bipolars in a room; what will happen–
What do you predict?
Will they, being the same, repel each other
Or, opposites, attract?

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65 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Poets United
    Aug 24, 2011 @ 08:26:41

    brilliant…must be the adrenaline

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  2. The Noiseless Cuckooclock
    Aug 24, 2011 @ 16:15:31

    magical wonders.
    well done.

    🙂

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  3. Miss Kitten
    Aug 24, 2011 @ 17:05:56

    Haha…I suppose it depends on which sides the bipolars are facing toward one another.

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  4. Jesse S. Mitchell
    Aug 24, 2011 @ 19:14:47

    very cool. It is brilliant. righteously dug.

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  5. Alcina
    Aug 25, 2011 @ 01:18:50

    Good question but the answer always twists and turns according to the changing moods of the likes and unlikes 😛

    Nice work!
    Alcina

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  6. carefreewanderer
    Aug 25, 2011 @ 06:35:59

    Only time will tell 😉 Nicely written 🙂

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  7. charlesmashburn
    Aug 25, 2011 @ 15:35:16

    And the guy in the rear burnt his driver’s license??
    Or was the one on the right on the left…
    Which one of us were you talking to?

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  8. antomaniax
    Aug 25, 2011 @ 18:01:09

    Mood is the key..

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  9. acoustic3
    Aug 25, 2011 @ 19:27:24

    Attract! Until the magents wear thin!
    Brilliant.

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  10. wordcoaster
    Aug 25, 2011 @ 22:46:51

    There are a lot of should-be words. Puliono would be a good one. I’m sure it means something in some language. 🙂

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  11. fiveloaf
    Aug 25, 2011 @ 22:55:17

    good sharing and thoughts! glad to be of acquaintance through thursday poets- my posting this week~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/08/04/strength-of-faith/

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  12. Ina
    Aug 26, 2011 @ 02:24:02

    lol I don’t want to find out what could happen, by the looks of the pic it would be better to leave the room! Funny poem!

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  13. CC Champagne
    Aug 26, 2011 @ 05:55:01

    I just got this image of two lines dancing across a black screen, sometimes parallel, as if spooning, sometimes distancing themselves from each other, sometimes crossing… Sometimes smooth and sometimes buzzing, fuzzy with energy…

    So many images from your few words! Brilliant!

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  14. The Cello Strings
    Aug 26, 2011 @ 13:02:03

    what a delightful one.

    you make us think, keep it up.

    🙂

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  15. ashbeezone
    Aug 27, 2011 @ 00:40:57

    Very Nice Poetry with a nice Mood ..

    Anyways, Take a look some of my Poetry Collections …
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/

    some of my Haiku Collections
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/creative-challenges/the-haiku-challenge/

    and also, on my very recent Work as well
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/08/15/india-of-my-dream/

    !!! Happy Rally !!!
    Cheers !!

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  16. blitzken
    Aug 27, 2011 @ 04:45:17

    😀 Simple and poignant.

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  17. poetryroad
    Aug 27, 2011 @ 08:22:44

    I always enjoy reading poetry, or prose, when a few words speak volumes! Great job!

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  18. muzzleflashing
    Aug 27, 2011 @ 15:46:35

    Very cool. Simple and to the point. And, yes, the title is my favorite part! =) Will definitely be back to check out more!

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    • wordcoaster
      Aug 27, 2011 @ 16:32:03

      Thanks! My doctor says I’ve almost hollowed out my left jowl so I have to limit my tongue-in-cheek. Yes, poke around–hopefully you’ll find something you like 🙂

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  19. dhitzunako
    Aug 27, 2011 @ 22:27:52

    Cool. Simple, yet nicely written. Oh, and a catchy title too.
    Happy rally. ^^

    http://dhitermination.wordpress.com/2011/08/20/morning-is-a-bliss/

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  20. Hey! Lena
    Aug 28, 2011 @ 17:31:27

    Stupendously succinct! Bravo!

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  21. Fountains
    Aug 28, 2011 @ 22:43:30

    Bloody good question, mate. I’d like to know. It might be pertinent that I know.

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  22. Iris D
    Aug 29, 2011 @ 23:34:46

    Good question. I think they will attract and repel.

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    • wordcoaster
      Aug 30, 2011 @ 11:12:07

      A nice safe answer.

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      • Fountains
        Aug 30, 2011 @ 12:05:57

        I’ve been thinking about this since I read it and I’ve decided I think they will drive each other mad with the idiosyncrasies that they can’t stand in themselves, and try to control the other for will of controlling themselves while deep down feeling guilt and remorse and pity for the other, and therefore themselves, and realize their audacity is really just the want to be loved not knowing the other has loved them all along, and that they love the other, henceforth loving themselves, but by then it’s too late because they’ve stabbed each other.

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  23. Kay Salady
    Aug 30, 2011 @ 12:26:43

    Well, since they’re both bi, they should get along swimmingly. Ha-ha-ha!

    Wait, there might be some sort of explosion due to a chemical reaction?

    I don’t think I’m going to get this one right no matter how hard I try. Wah!

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  24. pure2core
    Aug 30, 2011 @ 13:19:12

    Wow! quite short and crisp words… Amazing.. thanks for share..

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  25. Cassiopeia Rises
    Aug 30, 2011 @ 15:53:48

    Strange and so very interesting poem. Loved it.

    Melanie

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  26. Wyoming Diva
    Aug 30, 2011 @ 18:47:40

    Hahaha. This was great!

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  27. sillyfrogsusan
    Aug 31, 2011 @ 06:48:42

    COOL! So very COOL!

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  28. Leonargo
    Aug 31, 2011 @ 15:55:25

    I’m hoping the room has some doors, though I would like to peer in and see!

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  29. clariice
    Sep 01, 2011 @ 19:31:28

    Cute! Magnets – two scenarios at the same time!Enjoyed the pun as well 🙂

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  30. Ankoku Hikaru
    Sep 01, 2011 @ 20:02:00

    Short Simple, yet a bit Comedic. Nice Work. ^^

    http://ankokuhikaru.wordpress.com/2011/07/01/poetry-rose-masquerade/

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  31. SarSaparillameliSSa
    Apr 29, 2012 @ 15:21:39

    Ha 🙂 really like this, despite being somewhat thrown by chancing upon a blog set up with the same graphics and photo/poem layout as my own. I guess this is the right poem to have stumbled across with that in mind!

    Reply

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