Tightness in the Chest

Down the rabbit hole
Earthen walls are closing in


4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Cassiopeia Rises
    Aug 30, 2011 @ 13:34:48

    Wonderful use of prompt word and great Haiku.



  2. Leo
    Aug 31, 2011 @ 02:43:51

    I’m glad you enjoy them, for I enjoy reading your different takes to it too 🙂 Loved how you get the breathless situation of the protagonist through the last word!


    • wordcoaster
      Aug 31, 2011 @ 08:21:26

      Thank you! I almost missed this one because I thought the link opened on Sunday when it switched to Thursday. I’ll try to keep that in mind this week 🙂


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