Ineffective Communication

Reality is a dream
Dreams are concrete
Cold, hard concrete
Uncomfortable, no-
Painful, no-
Excruciating, maybe-
If only words could describe
But I’m not bilingual
I can only speak one half of the daily bisection:
The daytime dialect


10 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. charlesmashburn
    Sep 06, 2011 @ 11:18:44

    Dreams are a mystery to me, David. Sometimes I can make perfect sense of them, other times they are simply bizarre. Nice writing.

    Can’t remember if you’ve seen this one yet:


    • wordcoaster
      Sep 06, 2011 @ 11:33:58

      Thanks! I’d like to give you feedback on your poem (which I hadn’t seen yet, so thanks for linking it) but my ADD is kicking in so I think I’ll hold off for a bit ๐Ÿ™‚


  2. Sarah Johnston
    Sep 06, 2011 @ 11:34:51

    Dreams are still a wonder to all and do they show us what tomorrow will bring or what life could be. They leave behind a lot of questions in our mind


  3. The Noiseless Cuckooclock
    Sep 06, 2011 @ 13:46:49

    true words on dreams, yet, we do need keep dreaming.



  4. The Cello Strings
    Sep 07, 2011 @ 09:59:33

    beautiful wonders on dreams..


  5. The Orange Tree
    Sep 09, 2011 @ 10:03:31

    very powerful thought on dreams.

    the sad fact of single minded reality is brilliantly shown here.



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