Vision Collision

On permanent overdrive
Yearn through jealous eyes



14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Gemma Wiseman
    Sep 08, 2011 @ 17:49:24

    A little smile here! Wishing for connections??? Great suggestions in this haiku!


  2. iwrite4u
    Sep 08, 2011 @ 18:09:34

    Beautifully penned one


  3. Susie Clevenger
    Sep 08, 2011 @ 19:19:33

    Creative use of the word…I wonder what people do who have no imagination


  4. Andy Sewina
    Sep 09, 2011 @ 06:54:20

    Imagination is the stuff of life!

    Nicely written!!


  5. Mike
    Sep 09, 2011 @ 07:29:38

    A lovely haiku.
    Where would we be without our imagination?


  6. Cheryl
    Sep 09, 2011 @ 07:40:05

    Smiles from me for this one!


  7. Leo
    Sep 09, 2011 @ 13:21:09

    😀 Thats a different take. Absolutely.. sometimes jealous eyes are prominent than zealous ones perhaps..


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