Drink Deep, Resuscitate


Underwater air
Swiftly seeking the surface
Tiny bubble breaths

For http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/

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16 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Susie Clevenger
    Sep 20, 2011 @ 15:01:00

    Good job…love the picture it brings of bubbles popping to the surface.

    Reply

  2. poetrydiary
    Sep 20, 2011 @ 17:23:58

    This is a different perspective on breathing – I like the contrast.

    Reply

  3. magicalmysticalteacher
    Sep 20, 2011 @ 20:11:08

    A tiny bubble breath isn’t much breath at all!

    Nibbling Bubbles

    Reply

  4. The Orange Tree
    Sep 20, 2011 @ 20:13:02

    lovely…

    😉

    Reply

  5. Andy Sewina
    Sep 21, 2011 @ 04:55:38

    Fun picture, clever words!

    Reply

  6. Nanka
    Sep 21, 2011 @ 05:09:38

    That picture is contagious and couldn’t help having a hearty laugh myself!! Good for the heart they say!! 😀 Loved it, great fun!!

    Reply

  7. Traci B
    Sep 21, 2011 @ 08:40:59

    Great photo and a wonderful haiku. I like the “bubble breaths” alliteration. 🙂

    Reply

  8. reka sang
    Sep 21, 2011 @ 13:28:03

    Ah…different take…well done and the photo brought a smile to my face.

    Reply

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