Poetry on adrenaline
23 Sep 2011 24 Comments
in Haiku/Senryu/17 Syllables, Poetry, Word Prompt
Tags: April Hoekstra, Eliana Anthony, Jocelin Bell, Jocelin Yagel, Joshua Coleman, Lindsay Anne Dransfield, Lindsay Burkholder, lost, Luke Link, Poetry, Tim Yagel
Photo taken by Lindsay Burkholder
The fog has lifted
Lovers lost in tender gaze
You may kiss the bride
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Sep 23, 2011 @ 16:04:55
I am so enamored with love poems…I like this one a lot.
Sep 23, 2011 @ 16:32:31
Thanks! My love poems are rare, so I’m glad to know that this measures up in your estimation :)
The Noiseless Cuckooclock
Sep 23, 2011 @ 16:11:27
Sep 23, 2011 @ 16:33:30
Aw, thanks! I think I’m gonna use this on a wedding card for my friend :)
Sep 23, 2011 @ 17:08:28
Good idea. A nice thought.
Sep 23, 2011 @ 17:53:25
Thanks! I already have a very personalized poem, but I wanted something extra :)
Sep 23, 2011 @ 18:07:59
Wow! Lovely lines. Good for a Marriage Invitation Card. Well written.
Sep 23, 2011 @ 21:15:23
Aw, thanks! Though I’m not at the stage of inviting anyone to my wedding, I’ll keep that in mind :)
Sep 23, 2011 @ 18:45:46
sweet and tender ~
Sep 23, 2011 @ 21:19:13
Thanks! Sounds like something off a restaurant menu ;) Hope it was delicious!
Sep 23, 2011 @ 22:30:50
Sep 23, 2011 @ 23:10:06
Sep 24, 2011 @ 00:16:20
All is well that ends well!! From being lost in a mental fog to being lost in love! Sweet journey to cherish!!
Sep 24, 2011 @ 16:38:01
Thanks! The journey may be fraught with dangers, but sweet bliss awaits :)
Sep 24, 2011 @ 00:59:42
Smooth and graceful! I like it!
Sep 24, 2011 @ 16:38:43
Thank you! :)
Sep 24, 2011 @ 07:55:40
A great haiku.
Sep 24, 2011 @ 16:39:19
Thanks Mike :)
Sep 24, 2011 @ 11:13:45
Lovers in their own world without a care! Lovely!
Sep 24, 2011 @ 16:40:55
Mmm, how true–lovers are often peacefully oblivious–thanks! :)
Sep 24, 2011 @ 13:15:04
Oh, to be lost in a tender gaze… Wonderful!
Sep 24, 2011 @ 16:43:32
It’s a magical moment when it does happen; it’s even a happy event when it’s happening to someone else. Thanks! :)
Sep 24, 2011 @ 13:32:07
A lovely kind of lostness!
Lost Things here and here
Sep 24, 2011 @ 16:46:47
Wonderful words, those. Thanks for the links–they made me quite thirsty, though :)
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