Knoebels Knowledge


Hands wild in the air
Socially frowned upon screams
Phoenix rides again

Photo by Robert Nagy (loopyguy.com)

For http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/

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18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. ms pie
    Sep 25, 2011 @ 16:49:00

    it is beautiful to be on top of the world!!!!

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  2. Ramesh Sood
    Sep 26, 2011 @ 02:18:03

    One has to be like a phoenix to be sitting there….good one..

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  3. Gemma Wiseman
    Sep 26, 2011 @ 02:30:22

    Love the idea of wild hands attached to the phoenix! Creative description!

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  4. Nanka
    Sep 26, 2011 @ 04:05:14

    No more phoenix rides for me…twice in my life is just enough!! 🙂

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    • wordcoaster
      Sep 26, 2011 @ 13:44:21

      Oh man–I can’t imagine only riding twice in a lifetime. But, like the phoenix perhaps you’ll rise from the ashes and ride more in the next lifetime 🙂

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  5. Mike
    Sep 26, 2011 @ 06:59:35

    A great Haiku.
    Another scary ride – I don’t mind being on top of the world, it’s the coming down that scares me.

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  6. Andy Sewina
    Sep 26, 2011 @ 10:41:42

    WoW! I wouldn’t wanna ride that!

    Cool words!

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  7. becca givens
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 01:08:53

    ahh, this is a good one! 🙂

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  8. Traci B
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 08:48:26

    Excellent poem, and that photo made me momentarily dizzy. 🙂

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  9. magicalmysticalteacher
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 18:39:50

    Who could help but scream, socially acceptable or not? 🙂

    Can you see a phoenix here or here?

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    • wordcoaster
      Sep 27, 2011 @ 23:19:31

      Believe it or not, some actually retain accepted social boundaries even in such circumstances! Now as to your other question, yes and no–mostly no (I cannot SEE a phoenix, though the theme is certainly there 🙂

      Reply

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