Honest Appraisal


Panic picnic of mind
Release reels of thread
Absolve absolute of bind
Yield yells of fed

Beauty lies in shapes
A glittering diamond
A beating, living, loving heart
The sliver of a moon
The semicircle of a smile
Or, rather, oval tears
A twinkling star
Crop circles

Practicality lies in shapes
The food triangle
The oval office
The pentagon
Times Square

Iā€™d square this poem
But it would make it circular
So with the ding of a triangle
Geometric poem ends

Thanks to whoever nominated me–I think it was duncancleary, a wonderful poet himself and someone I’d love to have a fireside chat with.
I nominate The Noiseless Cuckooclock for thought-provoking verse that illuminates the good, bad, and worse.

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4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Poetry & Icecream
    Oct 15, 2011 @ 09:49:15

    I like this! I love the use alliteration and the last two stanzas regarding shapes. Well written šŸ™‚

    Reply

  2. Promising Poets' Poetry Cafe
    Oct 21, 2011 @ 13:16:41

    awesome.

    join us today for week 54.

    Reply

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