Energy Increases

Photo by James Veldhorst

In crags, dimplings of rock face
Deep pockets smiles make
Asleep the deep rumble of bass
‘Til frowns low pow’r awake




18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. marousia
    Oct 24, 2011 @ 03:00:17

    Simple perfection


  2. halfwaybetweenthegutter
    Oct 24, 2011 @ 08:42:19

    Such beautiful imagery in a few short words 🙂


  3. charlesmashburn
    Oct 24, 2011 @ 09:31:36

    I like the picture and how the poem makes me look for the smiles and frowns. They are there, too! Nice post, David!


    • wordcoaster
      Oct 24, 2011 @ 10:54:27

      Thanks! My friend is a marvelous photographer. I wrote the poem without the picture, but it certainly fit quite well 🙂 Wolves are amazing and I love how you captured them in your poem!


  4. Morning
    Oct 24, 2011 @ 14:31:12

    This is smiling.



  5. Judy Roney
    Oct 24, 2011 @ 19:18:33

    What a great idea. You harvested the energy of the water for this poem. Beautiful photo and thoughts.


  6. becca givens
    Oct 24, 2011 @ 21:26:49

    Flowing waters in the mountains have wonderful energy! Beautiful combination of words and photography! 🙂


    • wordcoaster
      Oct 24, 2011 @ 21:57:05

      Thanks! This is a place I like to visit whenever I get the chance (which isn’t often–perhaps once a year, if that) because it is so beautiful and it’s always different 🙂


  7. Kay Salady
    Oct 25, 2011 @ 10:04:35

    Fascinating write. Thank you!


  8. The Orange Tree
    Oct 26, 2011 @ 14:39:34


    love the nature treat.



    • wordcoaster
      Oct 26, 2011 @ 16:41:57

      Though I appreciated the fact that you found this doubly impressive and were willing to proclaim your love for it twice–I decided to delete your duplicate comment. I hope you don’t mind 😉


  9. Sarah Johnston
    Oct 27, 2011 @ 01:19:29

    the perfection of a perfect stream down a rock face or a waterfall nature beauty does shine through


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