Truth Like a Rubber Band


Conjunctivitis
And or but yet obsessions
And the space between

 

For http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/

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14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. manicddaily
    Dec 04, 2011 @ 21:10:46

    Very interesting, and such a great photo to go with it. A lot of energy in your work. K.

    Reply

    • wordcoaster
      Dec 04, 2011 @ 21:45:08

      Thanks! I try to keep my poems and pictures cohesive–this one had some extra help with the concrete 😉 And I’m glad you can feel the energy; this wouldn’t be a wordcoaster without that 😀

      Reply

  2. Ramesh Sood
    Dec 04, 2011 @ 23:58:28

    Good one… you have put it pretty concretely..

    Reply

  3. meethimirchi
    Dec 05, 2011 @ 08:37:35

    good one

    Reply

  4. Amity
    Dec 06, 2011 @ 08:22:15

    Words to think about!

    Reply

  5. ruchi jain
    Dec 08, 2011 @ 02:01:52

    pretty unique.

    Reply

  6. Melanie Jan Bishop
    Dec 09, 2011 @ 13:40:30

    Very Interesting Haiku. Very different.

    Melanie

    Reply

  7. The Poetry Palace
    Dec 16, 2011 @ 23:46:50

    very unique and lovely.

    Reply

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