Treated you unfairly
Like a bully
Treats a weakling
Strictly speaking
I’ve been dumb
Wagged my thumb
In your direction
Resist correction
From the teacher
Hard to reach, or
Staying open?


8 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. MyWordsWhisper
    Jan 20, 2012 @ 12:58:21

    I like this. Especially ‘hard to reach, or staying open?


  2. Taylor
    Jan 20, 2012 @ 16:26:27

    smart wordplay.


  3. Snowflakes
    Jan 23, 2012 @ 16:40:33

    cool verse,



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