Song of the Thief

Guilt for what I’ve done,
Proud of my accomplishment:
Discordant music


Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 – Day 4 – February 4th – Theme: Opposite Emotions

14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. becca givens
    Feb 04, 2012 @ 12:31:50

    You successfully worked music into the prompt as well — two prompts taken care of with select 17 syllables … well done! 🙂


  2. Grace
    Feb 04, 2012 @ 14:52:50

    Nice discordant music haiku…indeed it does ~


  3. Natalie Sunflowers
    Feb 04, 2012 @ 16:03:51

    lovely contradiction and success in haiku form.


  4. Someone is Special
    Feb 04, 2012 @ 16:33:10

    Perfect one for the theme.. Loved it so much..

    Someone is Special


  5. zongrik
    Feb 04, 2012 @ 18:23:53

    this also works for the temptation prompt on with real toads

    four craft of music senryu


  6. Amber
    Feb 05, 2012 @ 05:00:08

    WOW!! I love the way you used the word “music”. Very nice! 🙂


  7. Magical Mystical Teacher
    Feb 05, 2012 @ 10:22:08

    Indeed, you describe discordant music!

    Yes to the Music


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