Poetry on adrenaline
09 Apr 2012 15 Comments
in Haiku/Senryu/17 Syllables, Poetry, Word Prompt
Tags: Asher Rousseau, Poetry, seashore
Jellyfish stings, sand rashes,
Sunburn. (Not ideal)
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Apr 09, 2012 @ 19:09:25
All those not so nice things which can harm you on the seashore. Lovely written.
Apr 09, 2012 @ 19:30:58
Thanks! I’m not always such a Negative Nancy, but thought I’d share a dissenting view this time :)
Apr 09, 2012 @ 20:20:46
oouch…that hurts ~ a twist on the prompt, very nice ~
Apr 09, 2012 @ 20:25:41
Thanks! (And people wonder why I don’t like the beach) :)
Apr 09, 2012 @ 22:07:30
I have been there … :D Fortunately, it is not like that each and every time. This is my Day 9 ~~ Stretches of Seashore.
Apr 09, 2012 @ 22:39:47
Yes, I’m glad it isn’t! Enjoyed your take on the positive side of the seashore :)
Apr 10, 2012 @ 00:02:03
The gift and the curse of summer! Beautifully expressed!
Apr 10, 2012 @ 00:07:04
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)
Apr 10, 2012 @ 08:02:55
Well, you take what you get, huh? :)
“Six Takes on ‘Seashore’”
Apr 10, 2012 @ 11:12:46
Yup, “You take what you get and you don’t get upset!” :)
Apr 10, 2012 @ 19:55:40
No, not an ideal getaway. We’ve all been there and can relate; you captured it well.
Apr 10, 2012 @ 23:33:57
Thanks–the beach sure has its charms, but it also has its downsides :)
Apr 20, 2012 @ 00:45:32
Beatutifuuly pointed out.. I spent so much time on removing sand grains from my feet every night.. when I went to seashore for a vacation.. RS:)
Apr 20, 2012 @ 00:46:20
Forgive spellings of ‘Beautifully’ above.. typoerror..there was being careless a bit..
Apr 20, 2012 @ 02:25:32
Haha, I actually didn’t notice when I first read it–I must be tired! ;) Yes sand gets everywhere–inbetween your toes, in your scalp, on your afternoon sandwiches (where they got their name, perhaps?) and in the corners of your eyes. Still, the ocean is a beautiful place :)
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