Poetry on adrenaline
29 Apr 2012 24 Comments
in Haiku/Senryu/17 Syllables, Poetry
Tags: Anne Anthony, James Anthony, Kory Twit, Poetry, Russ Bevan, Tomoko Bibby
Parades of people
Paper cuts still hurt
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Apr 29, 2012 @ 15:43:35
Give me a gash with a serrated knife any day over a paper cut!
A haibun, Honey for My Soul
Apr 29, 2012 @ 15:59:04
Actually, I think I’d agree with that one–paper cuts are terribly bothersome. :)
Apr 29, 2012 @ 16:34:35
Well crafted haiku – I love origami
but would hate the cuts.
Apr 29, 2012 @ 17:04:21
Thank you! ^Was that a pun? Since, you know, origami’s kinda “crafty”… :)
Apr 29, 2012 @ 23:12:13
A paper cut is one of the most painful nuisances!!! Nicely done!!
Apr 30, 2012 @ 00:53:05
Yowch–that they are! Thank you :)
Apr 30, 2012 @ 09:43:05
Lovely. I like how each line is its own – yet together there is a story there.
Apr 30, 2012 @ 12:03:30
Thank you! I usually can do one or the other, but not both :D
Mar 09, 2013 @ 12:47:20
Ouch! I had forgotten that part. Everything in moderation. I guess.
Mar 09, 2013 @ 13:56:29
Haha, yes–I think only clumsy thumbs like mine are prone to the paper sword :)
Mar 09, 2013 @ 13:15:14
Powerful use of the haiku form to invoke contemplation
Mar 09, 2013 @ 14:00:31
Thank you! Loved your carefully folded words! :)
Mar 09, 2013 @ 16:00:58
Beautifully folded layering of ideas!
Mar 10, 2013 @ 19:36:36
Thank you! I loved your unfolding haiku :)
Mar 10, 2013 @ 01:26:49
“Paper cuts still hurt” – PERFECT last line!!!
Mar 11, 2013 @ 18:35:53
Thank you! I really enjoyed your perspective on chronic illnesses and how that can erode a person’s self-image and identity. :)
Mar 10, 2013 @ 05:50:20
Loved the last line! Beautiful haiku :)
Mar 11, 2013 @ 18:41:18
Thank you! Enjoyed your myriad of haiku creations :)
Mar 10, 2013 @ 16:36:12
Mar 11, 2013 @ 18:47:37
Thanks! I loved your bending bough, natural origami haiku. :)
Mar 11, 2013 @ 07:59:51
Wonderful take :-)
Mar 11, 2013 @ 18:49:34
Thank you! Loved your breathtaking set of haiku :)
Mar 12, 2013 @ 12:23:08
Mar 12, 2013 @ 16:07:00
Thanks! I enjoyed your three different takes on the prompt :)
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