Helpful, sensible
Mask softly repeats over
Research, but hang loose
Foresight from 460
12 May 2012 18 Comments
in Haiku/Senryu/17 Syllables, Poetry, Word Prompt Tags: mask, Poetry, Russell Mask
Poetry on adrenaline
12 May 2012 18 Comments
by wordcoaster in Haiku/Senryu/17 Syllables, Poetry, Word Prompt Tags: mask, Poetry, Russell Mask
Helpful, sensible
Mask softly repeats over
Research, but hang loose
I'm just a poor poet, writing the world as I know it: ultraviolet and lead.
Join me on this path of whimsy?
Here's what's in my head:
Jaideep
May 12, 2012 @ 02:48:25
“Mask softly repeats over”.. Deep thought!
wordcoaster
May 13, 2012 @ 18:53:44
Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Anu
May 12, 2012 @ 03:39:54
Amzing .. nd creative thought ..
Anu 🙂
wordcoaster
May 13, 2012 @ 18:55:47
Thank you! You’re too kind 🙂
Chevrefeuille
May 12, 2012 @ 07:39:01
Very deep haiku … thank you for sharing this with us.
wordcoaster
May 13, 2012 @ 18:57:11
Always glad to share, thanks for reading 🙂
artmusedog
May 12, 2012 @ 08:08:25
very contemplative haiku ~ ‘research, but hang loose’ says a lot ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
wordcoaster
May 13, 2012 @ 18:59:10
Yes, I will be doing quite a bit of contemplating this summer; thanks! 🙂
Blue Flute
May 12, 2012 @ 23:16:05
Hard to research and hang loose at the same time… but it is in fact a sensible thing to do 😉
wordcoaster
May 13, 2012 @ 19:01:25
At times they seem to be completely contradictory, but they really are compatible! 🙂
Patti
May 14, 2012 @ 11:35:49
Very thought ful haiku. The last few words made me smile.
wordcoaster
May 14, 2012 @ 13:57:16
Thanks! Yes, “hang loose” is not something I thought I would ever encounter in a haiku, much less write myself, but there it is 🙂
sparklysilverstars
May 14, 2012 @ 11:49:09
Beautiful haiku!
wordcoaster
May 14, 2012 @ 13:58:24
Thank you so much! 🙂
zongrik
May 16, 2012 @ 14:49:12
i like your creative use of mask
ugly man mask
wordcoaster
May 27, 2012 @ 19:36:30
Thank you! Your picture was… interesting to say the least 😉
Viola Cohen
Jun 10, 2012 @ 00:19:13
keep it up…
fabulous haiku.
wordcoaster
Jul 24, 2012 @ 17:01:39
Thank you! I’ve been taking a break from blogging this summer, but I will come back to it some time soon 🙂