Evening Gown


The Days Run Into Night

Sundrops glow
Dusk approaches slow
Then comes night

For: http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/

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22 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. CuriositytotheMax
    Jan 19, 2013 @ 23:10:55

    I so like the rhyme of the first two lines which gets a huge punctuation from the last line. VERY nice.

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  2. Alice Keys
    Jan 19, 2013 @ 23:36:44

    Inspirational. Dusk. Thanks.
    Alice

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  3. Meenakshi Malhotra
    Jan 20, 2013 @ 00:40:54

    wow! Title gave it a surreal effect! amazingly written!

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  4. Write Girl
    Jan 20, 2013 @ 00:41:20

    What a lovely evening gown the sky wears!

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  5. Robyn
    Jan 20, 2013 @ 18:48:39

    Great title with your haiku – sounds like a fun night about to begin!

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  6. readinpleasure
    Jan 20, 2013 @ 21:32:25

    This flows so wonderfully WC 🙂

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  7. vidyatiru
    Jan 21, 2013 @ 00:32:45

    love the title.. and the words flow so well

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  8. eof737
    Jan 23, 2013 @ 01:42:54

    I love the lyrical nature of this haiku… 🙂
    Eliz
    Mine is here: http://positivekismet.blogspot.com/2013/01/musings-haiku-small-stones-at-dusk.html

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  9. heavenhappens
    Jan 23, 2013 @ 14:16:07

    I love the idea of sun drops ~ describes the colour patches at dusk perfectly

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    • wordcoaster
      Jan 27, 2013 @ 17:28:33

      Thank you! Yes, I loved that phrase because it could describe many things simultaneously, both the dappled patches in the clouds and literally the position of the sun 🙂

      Reply

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