Sundrops glow
Dusk approaches slow
Then comes night
For: http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/
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Evening Gown
19 Jan 2013 22 Comments
in 3-5-3, Haiku/Senryu/17 Syllables, Poetry, Word Prompt Tags: dusk, Eliana Anthony, Poetry
Jan 19, 2013 @ 23:10:55
I so like the rhyme of the first two lines which gets a huge punctuation from the last line. VERY nice.
Jan 20, 2013 @ 00:59:26
Thank you so much! I loved your dusty dusk haiku 🙂
Jan 19, 2013 @ 23:36:44
Inspirational. Dusk. Thanks.
Alice
Jan 20, 2013 @ 14:50:01
Thank you! This was a hard prompt because dusk is such a fantastic word–so many connotations and possibilities. Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Jan 20, 2013 @ 00:40:54
wow! Title gave it a surreal effect! amazingly written!
Jan 20, 2013 @ 14:52:10
Thanks! I love the effect that a picture or title can have on a poem–it can give it new layers of meaning. 🙂
Jan 20, 2013 @ 00:41:20
What a lovely evening gown the sky wears!
Jan 20, 2013 @ 15:31:49
Thank you! Yes, she certainly knows how to dress up 🙂
Jan 20, 2013 @ 18:48:39
Great title with your haiku – sounds like a fun night about to begin!
Jan 20, 2013 @ 21:55:49
Thank you! I always have been a night owl 🙂
Jan 20, 2013 @ 21:32:25
This flows so wonderfully WC 🙂
Jan 20, 2013 @ 22:26:07
Thank you so much! Are you taking a break from haiku at the moment?
Jan 21, 2013 @ 10:54:37
No, I just posted my Haiku. 🙂
Jan 21, 2013 @ 23:39:55
Wonderful–I was getting worried 😉
Jan 21, 2013 @ 00:32:45
love the title.. and the words flow so well
Jan 21, 2013 @ 00:40:50
Thank you! It’s very hard to make them flow in so few syllables, so I’m glad you enjoyed it! 🙂
Jan 21, 2013 @ 15:43:18
My post is up on my blogger site: http://mryandrspace.blogspot.com
Jan 22, 2013 @ 12:39:43
Hmm… it keeps telling me blog not found 😦
Jan 23, 2013 @ 01:42:54
I love the lyrical nature of this haiku… 🙂
Eliz
Mine is here: http://positivekismet.blogspot.com/2013/01/musings-haiku-small-stones-at-dusk.html
Jan 23, 2013 @ 22:36:03
Thank you! Enjoyed your whole dusky post, with quotes, haiku, poems, and pictures all put together so nicely 🙂
Jan 23, 2013 @ 14:16:07
I love the idea of sun drops ~ describes the colour patches at dusk perfectly
Jan 27, 2013 @ 17:28:33
Thank you! Yes, I loved that phrase because it could describe many things simultaneously, both the dappled patches in the clouds and literally the position of the sun 🙂