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Sleeping, but in pain:
Can’t sit up or move around–
Rescue from a friend.

Much Better

For: haiku-heights.blogspot.com

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14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Alice Keys
    Jan 27, 2013 @ 20:56:55

    I like this very personal and grabby expression through the haiku prompt “rescue”. This sounds like my sister two weeks ago. “Poor thing” to anyone in this condition.

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    • wordcoaster
      Jan 31, 2013 @ 19:08:14

      Thanks! Never thought I’d consider “grabby” a compliment–but here I definitely do. “Poor thing” is right; reduced mobility makes you feel like an object. Hope your sister’s feeling 1,000 times better now! πŸ™‚

      Reply

  2. Write Girl
    Jan 27, 2013 @ 21:42:50

    I can feel the pain in this haiku. It’s wonderful when a friend can come and relieve you of some of it.

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  3. CuriositytotheMax
    Jan 27, 2013 @ 23:25:37

    I so hope that haiku wasn’t written from your personal experience OR my reversed-enginered haiku post blaming you!
    Either way, feel better.

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    • wordcoaster
      Feb 02, 2013 @ 16:50:35

      This was unfortunately written from personal experience–I still need to try that reverse-engineered haiku idea. I am feeling much better; I even went dancing last night πŸ™‚

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  4. readinpleasure
    Jan 28, 2013 @ 13:35:32

    Ow, hope you feel better soon, my dear friend. πŸ™‚

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  5. Sabio Lantz
    Jan 28, 2013 @ 19:12:22

    Ouch — so sorry.
    Friends are so very important. Be better sooooon !

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  6. ElizOF
    Jan 28, 2013 @ 20:09:44

    Do hope you get well soon…
    Eliz

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  7. meenakshi
    Jan 29, 2013 @ 00:37:54

    If it is personal, I hope you recover soon. One more reason to have friends.

    nice haiku!

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  8. wordcoaster
    Feb 03, 2013 @ 02:04:50

    Thank you so much meenakshi–friends are an undeniable treasure. πŸ™‚

    Reply

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