Seasons to Cycles


Chilled Humility

Winter’s humble state
Melts to Spring, then Summer’s pride
Comes before a Fall.

For: http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/

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18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Meenakshi Malhotra
    Feb 03, 2013 @ 03:49:37

    and the cycle continues, not caring about pride , wonderful!

    Reply

  2. heavenhappens
    Feb 03, 2013 @ 10:49:04

    That’s very original and it made me smile x Loved it x

    Reply

  3. Alice Keys
    Feb 03, 2013 @ 13:04:36

    Beautiful circle. I like this.

    Reply

  4. CreativitytotheMax
    Feb 03, 2013 @ 16:42:07

    NOW THAT’S a play on words I wish I had thought of! (That’s my highest compliment)

    Reply

  5. Locomente
    Feb 04, 2013 @ 03:54:28

    Summer’s pride and winter melting into spring.. So poetic.. Good job!!!

    Reply

  6. readinpleasure
    Feb 04, 2013 @ 06:06:30

    beautiful and clever take on the prompt

    Reply

  7. Reshma
    Feb 05, 2013 @ 18:41:10

    Simply wonderful…”summer’s pride before the fall” now that is ingenious

    Reply

  8. ElizOF
    Feb 06, 2013 @ 09:26:48

    Well said… Beautiful use of words in your haiku. 😉
    Eliz

    Reply

  9. Magical Mystical Teacher
    Feb 08, 2013 @ 18:52:33

    Round and round the seasons go!

    No Pride of Lions

    Reply

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