Sky Buoy

Savor sun’s last flame
Until dawn’s embers appear:
New fire shimmering.


Light the sky


14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. CuriositytotheMax
    Feb 24, 2013 @ 21:20:26

    Wonderful interpretation of “shimmer” – different ways of expressing fire is great.


  2. Alice Keys
    Feb 24, 2013 @ 23:08:52

    I like to think about the dawn when I go to bed. It is so shimmering full of creative energy for me.


  3. Reading Pleasure
    Feb 25, 2013 @ 06:48:36

    This is beautiful 🙂


  4. Meenakshi Malhotra
    Feb 26, 2013 @ 07:16:21

    nicely written, Dawn is such beautiful as a fresh conceived idea.


  5. Reshma
    Feb 26, 2013 @ 11:40:41

    Superb wordplay. The new day is always shimmering,full of promises 🙂


  6. Adriana Dascalu
    Feb 26, 2013 @ 18:34:34

    Loved the word choice! Beautiful haiku!


  7. typewriterpoet
    Feb 28, 2013 @ 20:43:03

    sunrise and sunset are not nearly so divine as when someone writes like this about it then it becomes magical.


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