Mockingbird Monologue


Stone cobbled rocks hard leaves blow along
Gray feathers wings bird seeds flying song
Cold metal black fence wet slick rail
Moan wither gust gasp brisk exhale

A Single Stroke

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2 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. readinpleasure
    Feb 27, 2013 @ 10:35:51

    This is nice

    Reply

    • wordcoaster
      Mar 05, 2013 @ 01:37:01

      Thanks! I wanted to experiment with voice, and tried a more abstract description to a scene I saw, where a mockingbird flew down to a gravel path, ate some crumbs and flew away as some leaves blew past the window. It’s very different from my usual style, and I’m not sure I like it, but I tried it anyway 🙂

      Reply

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