White Sand

Under snows
Fresh white and chilling
Sea breeze blows

For: http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/

Beachy Keen


18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. randomandunheardof
    Mar 02, 2013 @ 10:02:56

    I usually hate haiku’s for their shortness and their lack of real emotion but this one is seriously beautiful, thank you for sharing this.


    • wordcoaster
      Mar 05, 2013 @ 01:52:47

      Thank you for this amazing compliment! I find I often write haiku because they are short and I’m busy, but sometimes their brevity makes them filter out all the filler and jump directly to the punchline. So glad you enjoyed it 😀


  2. Meenakshi Malhotra
    Mar 02, 2013 @ 10:43:06

    Nice one, bone chilling!


  3. Alice Keys
    Mar 02, 2013 @ 13:47:31

    Breezy. Yikes. Very cold.


  4. typewriterpoet
    Mar 04, 2013 @ 01:04:51

    this is lovely i can just imagine a day like this.


  5. readinpleasure
    Mar 04, 2013 @ 12:10:39

    Very nice 🙂


  6. kaanakalyan
    Mar 05, 2013 @ 09:39:37

    Great haiku lines. My wishes always.


  7. Reshma
    Mar 05, 2013 @ 12:00:00

    lovely lines, sea breeze soothes the mind that is weighed down by chilling snow…


  8. ElizOF
    Mar 09, 2013 @ 03:22:28

    Terrific…. and the addition of snow works. 😉


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