Steady Siren

Birdsong silhouette
Perched atop a cypress tree:
Day and nightingale



12 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Russ L
    Apr 17, 2013 @ 07:33:57

    Nice twist!


  2. Alice Keys
    Apr 17, 2013 @ 12:02:46

    Very true this time of year. The birds are busy marking territory with song.


  3. Poetry For Your cause
    Apr 17, 2013 @ 15:35:42

    Beautiful, I always struggle with Haikus but you seem to have a natural talent for them.


    • wordcoaster
      Apr 17, 2013 @ 21:04:48

      Thank you so much! I guess there’s truth in the old adage that practice makes perfect (though I’m still a LONG way from that)–and I still struggle with haiku, I just write a lot of them 🙂


  4. oneofaclass
    Apr 18, 2013 @ 00:20:21

    I enjoyed your play on words. Nice take!


  5. readinpleasure
    Apr 18, 2013 @ 09:55:52

    Beautiful play on words


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