Sometimes I stand still
Underneath the waterfall
Pretending it’s rain.
For: http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/
You know what’s not pretend? These free poetry books that I’m still giving away! Hurry before it’s too late!
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Perspective Precipitation
26 Apr 2013 21 Comments
in Haiku/Senryu/17 Syllables, Poetry, Word Prompt Tags: NaPoWriMo, Poetry, waterfall
Apr 26, 2013 @ 23:46:18
Carrying an umbrella?
Apr 27, 2013 @ 09:26:40
That would be a better idea, perhaps. 🙂
Apr 26, 2013 @ 23:51:22
pretending it’s rain
tap dancing like Gene Kelly
glorious feeling
MP
Apr 27, 2013 @ 09:27:31
Wonderful! You captured the magic in your words. 🙂
Apr 27, 2013 @ 01:19:36
Pretending it’s rain
when it’s dew pulled from branches
can lead to splinters.
WC
Apr 27, 2013 @ 09:28:10
Hahaha LOVE it. So glad you’re doing the challenge! 🙂
Apr 27, 2013 @ 18:48:57
Move to oregon. You can do both at the same time. Rain and waterfalls.
Apr 27, 2013 @ 18:50:40
Haha, I get enough rain as it is. Oregon sounds a bit too wet for me 🙂
Apr 27, 2013 @ 19:59:34
For me, too. Working on being Orgeon expat right now.
Apr 27, 2013 @ 20:37:46
It takes a special kind of person to enjoy Oregon/Washington weather. I’ve met some of those people; they’re often extremely nice. I will never understand them. 🙂
Apr 28, 2013 @ 15:08:56
I used to be one of them. I’ll never understand that. 🙂
Apr 28, 2013 @ 18:53:42
Haha, how long did you last? 🙂
Apr 28, 2013 @ 20:07:02
27 years. (Don’t laugh.) 😉
Apr 28, 2013 @ 20:17:58
Too late I already did 😀
Apr 28, 2013 @ 20:26:55
ME too.;-) Funny old life.
Apr 28, 2013 @ 22:12:55
I bet it built a lot of character 😉
Apr 29, 2013 @ 00:11:01
Honey. I got enough character to sink a ship. I hope to spread some of it around and lighten my load. 😉 Hence the haiku and hula hooping and walking barefoot. I’m trying wear off some of my overlay of character. I think it may be rusted on.;-)
Apr 29, 2013 @ 10:07:18
You are too funny (guess I could say you’re a real character)–I hope you can spread it around, though without losing any of it yourself 🙂
Apr 29, 2013 @ 13:28:09
Perhaps I could chisel off the rustiest part. Just to limber up the brain, mind you. Nothing essential.;-)
Apr 29, 2013 @ 13:29:44
So long as you keep it on the shelf and don’t dispose of it completely I’m all for it 🙂
Apr 29, 2013 @ 13:39:21
🙂