Dive Into Darkness


It was a deep night,
The kind you just sink into
Like a submarine.

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6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. readinpleasure
    May 21, 2013 @ 07:34:15

    Wow! Superbly written

    Reply

  2. Russ L
    May 21, 2013 @ 07:38:00

    Nice Simile! Very Noire. 🙂

    Reply

  3. AJ
    May 23, 2013 @ 12:37:19

    Oh wow. I’ve been away too long! Beautiful brief poignancy. Ezra Pound-esque!

    Reply

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