Surprise Shower

People fall into my heart
Like rain from a cloudless sky:
Unexpected, but welcome—
A well where earth was dry.


6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. readinpleasure
    Aug 27, 2013 @ 08:24:58

    very nice 🙂


    • wordcoaster
      Sep 01, 2013 @ 22:19:06

      Thanks! Wrote this one a good week before I posted it–lately I’ve been choosing people over poetry. It’s an odd choice, and perplexes me. I think I kind of like it, though. 🙂


  2. viewingcamelot
    Aug 31, 2013 @ 11:12:14

    I love this one.


  3. viewingcamelot
    Sep 04, 2013 @ 11:21:01

    And they last with you longer too. 🙂


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