Yell hello,
Expect rejection:
She waves back!
Tidal
05 Apr 2012 20 Comments
in 3-5-3, Acrostic, Haiku/Senryu/17 Syllables, Poetry, Word Prompt Tags: Poetry, waves, Zack Jackson
Poetry on adrenaline
05 Apr 2012 20 Comments
in 3-5-3, Acrostic, Haiku/Senryu/17 Syllables, Poetry, Word Prompt Tags: Poetry, waves, Zack Jackson
Apr 05, 2012 @ 03:16:45
beautiful haiku..
Apr 05, 2012 @ 03:40:55
Thank you! Haven’t really tried out the shorter haiku form much…
Apr 05, 2012 @ 07:08:46
Good, and funny too!
Apr 05, 2012 @ 09:56:12
Thanks! Glad you found the humor in it
Apr 05, 2012 @ 07:32:22
Nice! I’m glad for “him”
Apr 05, 2012 @ 09:57:17
Thank you! I’ll be sure to let “him” know
Apr 05, 2012 @ 07:43:15
You should be happy.. there.. good one.
Apr 05, 2012 @ 10:25:37
Thanks! I am happy–and I hope you’re happy too
Apr 05, 2012 @ 09:26:15
I like this one. Point well taken
Apr 05, 2012 @ 10:29:15
Thank you! One of the advantages of using the 3-5-3 is that it forces you to be very direct and straight-shooting
Apr 05, 2012 @ 10:22:37
Cute!
Apr 05, 2012 @ 10:29:40
Aw, thanks!
Apr 05, 2012 @ 20:43:55
I like the short 3-5-3 verse…well done. I also took it as an echo, yelling back ~
My share: http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/04/waves.html
Apr 05, 2012 @ 23:28:28
Thank you! I like that–I wanted it to elicit a response and an echoed yell is loud and clear! Your haiku are very thought-provoking
Apr 05, 2012 @ 21:57:36
Very effectively done with the 3-5-3 form. Very nice direction!!
This is my Day 5 ~~ Waves Wash Over Me.
Apr 05, 2012 @ 23:29:17
Thanks! I enjoyed your healing waters as well
Apr 05, 2012 @ 23:58:47
Mother Nature is nice that way. She almost always waves back.
Apr 06, 2012 @ 20:17:03
Quite true– though there have been times she’s rained on my parade
Apr 06, 2012 @ 18:40:14
Great sense of shock scene in each line! Like jerky movement of stills in a film strip! Hilarious!
Apr 06, 2012 @ 20:19:39
Haha, I like that description, like three pictures in a photobooth printout. Thanks!