Tidal


Yell hello,
Expect rejection:
She waves back!

For: http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/

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20 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. S Jayanth
    Apr 05, 2012 @ 03:16:45

    beautiful haiku..

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  2. Russ L
    Apr 05, 2012 @ 07:08:46

    Good, and funny too!

    Reply

  3. Mariya Koleva
    Apr 05, 2012 @ 07:32:22

    Nice! I’m glad for “him” :-)

    Reply

  4. Ramesh Sood
    Apr 05, 2012 @ 07:43:15

    You should be happy.. there.. good one.

    Reply

  5. elleceef
    Apr 05, 2012 @ 09:26:15

    I like this one. Point well taken :-)

    Reply

  6. Karen
    Apr 05, 2012 @ 10:22:37

    Cute!

    Reply

  7. Grace
    Apr 05, 2012 @ 20:43:55

    I like the short 3-5-3 verse…well done. I also took it as an echo, yelling back ~

    My share: http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/04/waves.html

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  8. becca givens
    Apr 05, 2012 @ 21:57:36

    Very effectively done with the 3-5-3 form. Very nice direction!!

    This is my Day 5 ~~ Waves Wash Over Me.

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  9. Patti
    Apr 05, 2012 @ 23:58:47

    Mother Nature is nice that way. She almost always waves back.

    Reply

  10. Gemma Wiseman
    Apr 06, 2012 @ 18:40:14

    Great sense of shock scene in each line! Like jerky movement of stills in a film strip! Hilarious!

    Reply

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