Jaw opens and shuts
Opens again with small words
Ears like sponges catch
Retrieve the meaning barely
Although fumble with the gaps
New curiosity however fairly
Demands instant recaps
All paint-by-the-numbers maps
Look, I was talking to myself
Look, I was talking to myself
Poetry & Icecream
Oct 22, 2011 @ 09:04:16
Great haiku 🙂
wordcoaster
Oct 22, 2011 @ 11:48:00
Thanks! It was a difficult one to write as I didn’t know exactly where to take it 🙂
Grace
Oct 22, 2011 @ 12:30:42
To catch and capture words…nice one ~
wordcoaster
Oct 22, 2011 @ 12:55:39
Thanks! Capturing is the hard part–words don’t stay long in cages 🙂
Anthony North
Oct 22, 2011 @ 12:44:40
Clever haiku. I liked it.
wordcoaster
Oct 22, 2011 @ 12:56:45
Thanks, glad you enjoyed my small words 🙂
Nanka
Oct 22, 2011 @ 13:52:03
Very clever indeed!! and guided the words well!! 😉
wordcoaster
Oct 22, 2011 @ 15:58:24
Thanks! Hmm, a word guide, I like that a lot 🙂
Andy Sewina
Oct 22, 2011 @ 20:56:20
I like the way you fitted the Haiku into the Joe Randall acrostic. The italic repetition at the end is brilliant! As is the Steinbeckesque title.
wordcoaster
Oct 22, 2011 @ 23:27:47
Thanks! I’m so glad you appreciated all of those things–you really keyed in on the three things I was most excited about! 😀
meethimirchi
Oct 24, 2011 @ 09:10:00
well captured
wordcoaster
Oct 24, 2011 @ 10:51:22
Thanks! I’m glad to share my zoo of words 🙂
The Noiseless Cuckooclock
Oct 25, 2011 @ 13:50:51
cool and beautiful.
🙂
wordcoaster
Oct 25, 2011 @ 14:54:48
Thanks! Your cool comment brought warmth to my day 🙂
Mike
Oct 26, 2011 @ 11:59:55
Great Haiku. Love the idea of ears being like sponges and catching the words.
wordcoaster
Oct 26, 2011 @ 13:40:32
Thanks! I like that image because sponges can only hold so much–you truly can have an earful. At the same time, they can absorb a lot 🙂
magicalmysticalteacher
Oct 26, 2011 @ 18:16:47
I wish my students had ears like sponges!
Sponging up the river
wordcoaster
Oct 26, 2011 @ 22:54:05
Kids have sponges for ears–they just don’t always absorb what we want them to. 🙂
Susie Clevenger
Oct 27, 2011 @ 01:18:02
Nice…I too wrote my haiku on how children are sponges….we must learn to be better examples…they do see and hear us even when we believe they aren’t
wordcoaster
Oct 27, 2011 @ 01:30:37
So true! Loved your haiku, thanks!
becca givens
Oct 28, 2011 @ 23:13:18
Very clever!!
wordcoaster
Oct 28, 2011 @ 23:24:02
Thanks! Loved your mouthwatering haiku 🙂