Hush little baby;
Let silence now be heard–
Crying is absurd!
Logical Lullaby
10 Nov 2012 17 Comments
in Haiku/Senryu/17 Syllables, Poetry, Word Prompt Tags: Alexandra Day, Chesapeake, Good Dog Carl, Poetry, silence
Poetry on adrenaline
10 Nov 2012 17 Comments
by wordcoaster in Haiku/Senryu/17 Syllables, Poetry, Word Prompt Tags: Alexandra Day, Chesapeake, Good Dog Carl, Poetry, silence
Hush little baby;
Let silence now be heard–
Crying is absurd!
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I'm just a poor poet, writing the world as I know it: ultraviolet and lead.
Join me on this path of whimsy?
Here's what's in my head:
Meenakshi
Nov 11, 2012 @ 00:23:56
very nice, very effective!
wordcoaster
Nov 11, 2012 @ 01:29:03
Thanks! Hey, I tried to go to your blog, but the link didn’t work for some reason. Can you post it as a comment?
laughwithme45
Nov 11, 2012 @ 07:08:31
Ha – had to laugh – wish I could have read this to my kids when they were babies!
wordcoaster
Nov 11, 2012 @ 15:40:22
Haha, that would be wonderful! I wonder if there are any scientific studies on the effects of reading haiku to babies as part of their developmental process. I think it might make an interesting study 🙂
Meenakshi
Nov 11, 2012 @ 10:08:51
Sure: Please also review my blog, especially poetry part of it.
http://beyondwoman.blogspot.in/
Meenakshi
Nov 11, 2012 @ 10:12:32
Sure: Please also review my blog, especially poetry part of it (though these are my amateurish attempts)!
http://beyondwoman.blogspot.in/
wordcoaster
Nov 11, 2012 @ 15:40:45
Wonderful, I will!
brudberg
Nov 11, 2012 @ 12:30:02
Lovely I love silence as a lullaby.
wordcoaster
Nov 11, 2012 @ 15:58:08
Yes–it can be incredibly soothing, can’t it? 🙂
MentalMakeovers
Nov 11, 2012 @ 23:10:10
PERFECT!!!!
wordcoaster
Nov 12, 2012 @ 01:16:29
Thanks so much! I had fun with this one 🙂
readinpleasure
Nov 12, 2012 @ 11:30:55
Oh what a delightful and wonderful haiku
wordcoaster
Nov 13, 2012 @ 00:05:21
Thank you! I enjoyed your haiku (and subsequent silence-inspired poem) as well. Never a wrong time for such a reminder 🙂
magicalmysticalteacher
Nov 15, 2012 @ 08:18:59
But isn’t crying healing?
Deep Desert Silence
wordcoaster
Nov 17, 2012 @ 01:03:24
Some tears heal, and some just rub salt in the wounds (aggravate) 🙂
prema
Nov 15, 2012 @ 10:20:38
made me smile…thinking of my days as a young mother, with sometimes those exact thoughts reverberating in my head 🙂
wordcoaster
Nov 17, 2012 @ 01:05:46
Haha, definitely. Sometimes babies cry for an unknown reason that defies explanation. That is the most frustrating, because there’s no remedy. 🙂