Perfect Fit

If I could be anything for you
I’d be a backpack
That way I could help you carry your burdens
Hold your secrets
And all your necessities
I would be close to you
Any closer and I’d be
A fannypack

And those aren’t in style


10 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. expatinCAT
    Aug 03, 2011 @ 07:06:42

    A quirky, fun poem! // Peter.


  2. Fountains
    Aug 03, 2011 @ 10:40:33

    I absolutely love this. It’s cute, sweet and still clever. Innocent, and humorous, as well. I’ve got too many adjectives for this little poem. ❤


  3. C.B. Wentworth
    Aug 03, 2011 @ 19:44:05

    Love the humor of this! So cute. 🙂


  4. Danny Nettleton
    Aug 08, 2011 @ 12:18:39

    “and those aren’t in style” nice… i know the feeling… get close but not so close that you appear uncool and desperate. well done.


  5. Samanthamj
    Aug 08, 2011 @ 14:23:20

    ha! =) very sweet.. right up to the humorous ending.. thanks for the smile.


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