If I could be anything for you
I’d be a backpack
That way I could help you carry your burdens
Hold your secrets
And all your necessities
I would be close to you
Any closer and I’d be
A fannypack
And those aren’t in style
Perfect Fit
03 Aug 2011 10 Comments
in Free Verse, Poetry Tags: Amelia Anthony, Meredith Jones, Olivia Bankard, Poetry, Tonya Dentry
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Aug 03, 2011 @ 07:06:42
A quirky, fun poem! // Peter.
Aug 03, 2011 @ 10:01:29
Thanks! I think quirky may be my usual style 🙂
Aug 03, 2011 @ 10:40:33
I absolutely love this. It’s cute, sweet and still clever. Innocent, and humorous, as well. I’ve got too many adjectives for this little poem. ❤
Aug 03, 2011 @ 11:09:16
Yesssss! Too many adjectives–I like that, I like that a lot 🙂
Aug 03, 2011 @ 19:44:05
Love the humor of this! So cute. 🙂
Aug 03, 2011 @ 20:17:15
Thanks! This is one of only a few pieces I’ve ‘performed’ (if you call mumbling nervously to a silent room a performance, that is) 🙂
Aug 08, 2011 @ 12:18:39
“and those aren’t in style” nice… i know the feeling… get close but not so close that you appear uncool and desperate. well done.
Aug 08, 2011 @ 17:42:44
Haha “uncool and desperate”– I think I’ve definitely fit that description before 😛
Aug 08, 2011 @ 14:23:20
ha! =) very sweet.. right up to the humorous ending.. thanks for the smile.
Aug 08, 2011 @ 17:44:35
You’re welcome! I’m so glad you enjoyed it–humor can easily be hit or miss.