I turned over a new leaf
Which was attached to a branch
Linked to a trunk
Rooted in the ground
The cold dark earth
The warm light earth
Where used to reside the roots
Linked to a trunk
Attached to a branch
That held a leaf
Which turned me under
wordcoaster 
Aug 27, 2011 @ 19:02:41
I love the repetition and circular thought. Good job! http://www.benjity.wordpress.com
Aug 27, 2011 @ 20:23:21
Thanks! I tend to have circular thoughts because I’m a well-rounded person. 😛 Unfortunately I don’t have the time to fully explore your link right now, but I will 🙂
Nov 20, 2011 @ 18:39:42
ha…def nice circular…a leaf turned you under? smiles…guess that can happen with change…fun read…
Nov 20, 2011 @ 19:11:57
Yup, sometimes simple things like flipping leaves can turn our lives upside-down 🙂
Nov 20, 2011 @ 20:12:41
Oh man, you just rocked my world. 🙂 I love “which turned me under.” Nice!
Nov 20, 2011 @ 20:34:24
Whoa, awesome! Glad you not only liked it, but that it shook you up 😀
Nov 20, 2011 @ 21:43:00
Nice play of words, with touches of nature ~
Lovely share ~
Nov 20, 2011 @ 22:53:09
Thanks! I enjoy nature’s touch 🙂
Nov 20, 2011 @ 22:04:20
Great circular way of treatment given.
Hank
Nov 20, 2011 @ 22:55:28
Thanks! My logical fallacies have never been so well received 🙂
Nov 21, 2011 @ 01:39:57
oh, nicely done. love the swing around effect!
Nov 21, 2011 @ 02:29:40
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed swinging 🙂
Nov 21, 2011 @ 09:18:03
very special and beautiful change under a leaf.
Nov 21, 2011 @ 11:31:26
Yeah, I guess there’s a positive side to everything isn’t there? 🙂
Nov 27, 2011 @ 22:20:11
enjoyable, nice flip from root to tips, and back and forth 🙂
enjoy gooseberry day!!!
my entry: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/11/24/your-asogwe/
Nov 27, 2011 @ 22:21:09
enjoyable read, love how you started from root to tip and then made it tip to root, real cool!
my gooseberry entry: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/11/24/your-asogwe/
Nov 28, 2011 @ 11:33:16
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it enough to comment twice 🙂
Nov 28, 2011 @ 08:16:15
Thats a good one. Like the way you have brought it around 🙂
Nov 28, 2011 @ 11:34:28
Thanks! My mind so often runs in circles 🙂
Nov 28, 2011 @ 11:25:52
Nice word play, wordcoaster!
Nov 28, 2011 @ 11:37:54
Thanks, enjoyed your poem on hope as well 🙂
Nov 28, 2011 @ 13:37:04
the only metaphor worth it’s meaning
love it
irenethebean.worpress.com
Nov 28, 2011 @ 17:55:04
Thank you! I’m enjoying your site–though the one you left here was missing the d 😛
Nov 29, 2011 @ 00:29:09
Love it, it’s adorable 😀
Don’t read my poetry it’s depressing next to yours xD
lukewater
Nov 29, 2011 @ 00:35:31
Thanks! Haha, what a way to advertise! I’m sure if you looked through my poems you’d find a fair amount of the depressing as well 🙂